I was unhappy with the writing in the colour rough, so I used the lightbox to redraw the text, this time making it fit onto one page, rather than over two. This means that it won't distort if it gets lost a little in the gutter. I fitted it more closely around the figures as well, which will help to frame the characters.
I also added the orange blossom frame, and took out the Trojan horses and the apples, which seemed to make the image a little too busy. The orange blossoms are symbolic of the fact that the golden apples were thought to be oranges.
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